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  1. Good start some comments:

    1 your summary requires more detail/ focus. It should cover the most important and relevant information for the source: the argument, findings, theories, methods etc. Use your own words (very important that you don't just copy and paste, by paraphrasing you are forced to make judgements about the text in question).

    2 too general. If the book is relevant to you in terms of methodology say how. The quotation by the author is in the wrong place.

    3 the quotations section is where you keep key data (facts/ techniques/ quotations) that you have 'extracted' from the text through critical reading. You extract because you feel that you may need to use them later (for example, in your proposal or presentation at present and later when you are writing your thesis). Each quotation should be cited (page number in text). You might also find it useful to annotate each with a small description/ reminder. One data type not covered here (but very important) is visual data (images/ charts diagrams). If there any of these you think are significant attach cited images to this form.

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